No help at all -- Flash 55 Poetry
Ate another's bread
Taste not worthy to my tongue
Salted with his sweat
Walked another's path
Rock strewn, pits and snares abound
Stumbled, bruised my bod
Breathless going up
Up and down, steep was his stair
Tumbled each down step
Bear his load I'll not
Heavy, back cracking, I can't
Walked his walk for naught
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Poem copyright, Jimmiehov - All Rights Reserved
Today I'm linked with Kerry O'Conner in the Imaginary Garden
withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2015/07/flash-55-plus.html
Her instructions for writing a 55 word poem are there
Labels: Flash Writing, Humor(?), Poem, Real Toads, Senryū