Friday, June 09, 2017

A Friday Poem for Words Count

Naughty 

It was her day of the week
Dread day had come again
Long shore walk another land
Princess's weekly bane 

Stack of cards piled nine feet high
Dread task she couldn't abstain
Lucky pull got the 'Judgement' card
Princess's weekly bane

Boys swimming in the girls pool
Naughty boys had no shame
Forgive them today—Judgement
Princess's weekly fame

(Please note on the Tarot card the 
abundance of nymps swimming in the pool.)
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 - Photo and Poem Copyright © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved


 - I'm linked with, at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Words Count With Mama Zen, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/06/words-count-with-mama-zen.html


 - Mom Zen's words: "... visit Astrology.com to get your tarot card for the day (it's free; no sign-up). Explore the meaning of your card.  Treat it as a joke, a portent, a really cool piece of art - whatever suits your muse.  Just make sure your muse keeps her musings to 60 words or less." (I had exactly 60 words including the title.)


"The Daily Tarot
The Judgement(sic):  You can secure an important victory and achieve a long-held aspiration today. This obviously is not an overnight achievement but probably something you've been intermittently pursuing for a long time. Some dreams refuse to die, and this may be the day for one of those dreams to begin to see the light of day in the real world. Be heartened and don't let up now."                         
Above "Daily Tarot" text and my card picture (a screen print) are from: https://www.astrology.com/us/tarot/

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9 Comments:

At Friday, June 09, 2017 7:26:00 AM, OpenID howanxious said...

Ah, a judgement like that must leave its mark behind for sure.
Such an interesting idea portrayed so well.
-HA

 
At Friday, June 09, 2017 9:15:00 AM, Blogger Rommy said...

I never cared much for swimming either, especially on certain days.

 
At Friday, June 09, 2017 9:57:00 AM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

Oh, that judgement card... It comes with scars.

 
At Friday, June 09, 2017 10:11:00 AM, Blogger Mama Zen said...

I really like the way you worked the rhyme in this one, Jim.

 
At Friday, June 09, 2017 11:45:00 AM, Blogger Kerry O'Connor said...

This is really cool, Jim.

 
At Friday, June 09, 2017 1:46:00 PM, Blogger Gillena Cox said...

"Naughty" made me smile
Nice write

much love...

 
At Friday, June 09, 2017 2:17:00 PM, Blogger Sanaa Rizvi said...

Excellent write, Jim!❤️

 
At Saturday, June 10, 2017 1:30:00 AM, Blogger Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

A cute interpretation.

 
At Wednesday, June 21, 2017 11:24:00 PM, Blogger Margaret said...

...reminds me of coed gym class - even swim lessons and I hated it.

 

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