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Saturday, April 21, 2018

NaPoWriMo 2018-21 -- Day 21, a Limerick

My poem, a Limerick

There once was a narky young lad
Turned others off and girls real bad
Then along came Sally
Drug him in the alley
Scared bejesus knew he'd been had
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  - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2018, All Rights Reserved


  - I'm linked to Day Twenty-one of the NaPoWriMo,  http://www.napowrimo.net/day-twenty-one-3/ For National Poetry Month we are writing a new poem for every day in April.  We have nine days remaining. 

Today we studied Narkissis and of his shyness with girls. Somehow he would attract ladies and in his shyness lead them on. Most would then leave. But two of the women were so enamored with him that they took drastic measures when they were ditched.

Then we were to write our thoughts after reading of this young Greek lad. 

  - I'm also writing for http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2018/04/day-21-mythical-creatures.html?m=1 . He also wants us to write after observing some mythical creatures. 

12 comments:

  1. Love it, that “narky lad” got his come uppance. Bravo! :-)

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  2. Havelock Ellis, at late 19th-century psychologist, believed narcissism resulted in obsessive masturbation, where one is one's own sex object. Then along came Sally!

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  3. Is it fun or funny, I'm not sure? Probably both!

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  4. LOL! yet she shouldn't have

    Much🌼love

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  5. well that put a smile on my face...some fun with an underlying theme

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  6. Ooh, nice and naughty – just what a limerick should be.

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  7. I like the description "narky lad" a lot!

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  8. pretending being shy
    when really he was sly
    but the price must be paid
    for all ladies he'd laid

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  9. this is just absolutely delightful Jim - and wonderful word plays and layering of metaphors! whoot! just what the doctor ordered this day

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